Talk:Battrastrophe/@comment-15660147-20141226050922

I have some writing advice for you: when a character starts speaking in quotes, put it on a separate line. For example:

'''Rini and Milly were Hanging out in Milly's parents house. "Hey Rini, Imm gonna go get a drink in my little plastic cup." Suddenly, Gil Jr came in swinging a bat. "Be careful, Junior! Dontt swing that in the house!" "But It's so cool!" Argued Gil Jr, "Uncle Goby got it for me!"'''

Should look like:

'''Rini and Milly were Hanging out in Milly's parents house. '''

 "Hey Rini, I'm gonna go get a drink in my little plastic cup."

 Suddenly, Gil Jr came in swinging a bat.

 "Be careful, Junior! Dontt swing that in the house!"

''' "But It's so cool!" Argued Gil Jr, "Uncle Goby got it for me!"''' It makes things look neater. There are also some typos in the story. Did you copy and paste your story into Source Mode? When you're copying from a document, it's best to use the Visual tab. That one will keep your formatting.